AT LEAST THE RAIN HIDES MY TEARS

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Open Poetry #42

AT LEAST THE RAIN HIDES MY TEARS

MERCURY
Member

since 2003-04-16

Posts 190
Ireland

0 posted 2008-01-28 10:45 AM

I’m freefalling ,

Into the abyss,

I wish I had been more neutral,

Just like the Swiss.

Why did I kill all the good inside me?

Tortured words from a troubled mind,

I guess that’s the story off mankind.

Despairs cold grip is tugging at me,

I’ve been cursed just like the fig tree.

At least the rain hides my tears.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

1 posted 2008-01-28 01:53 PM

Nice writing...James

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

2 posted 2008-01-29 12:57 PM

Very good poem. I love the read.
sad though
Tom

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