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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Let me still Pass by you On my way To another day Without you The sun slowly Above the crest On a snowy hill A pair of swings Stiffly sway In the cold dawn air From the shore Of the frozen bay One can hear The seagulls cry . |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Nicely done, John. I enjoy hearing seagulls cry. |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
sad. but beautiful!!!! are we all crying for life? or only seagull? Sun or moon, who makes snow live longer? oh, just a sad day. have a safe weekend, dear John. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
The beginning and end of this 'write' are especially fine! applause! |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Huan Yi, Very good work. I can picture it. We get sea gulls in the parking lot of our inner-city shopping mall. It's fun to see and hear them. They travel about fifty miles from the shore just to be with us. We feed them. BTW, I really like whitefish. Bobby [This message has been edited by Bobby Jordan (01-26-2008 03:23 PM).] |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
you have such beauty in your words John... enjoyed.. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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aziza Member Elite
since 2006-07-09
Posts 2995Lumpy Oatmeal makes me Crazy! |
The swings are what got to me. They seem so lonely as I see them in my mind - A |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice...James |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed ARCTIC WIND |
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