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miscellanea
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0 posted 2008-02-18 09:08 PM

Windsongs tease in tangle
Jingle jangle, alight and disappear;
Stars ring the chime of night
Tingling pewter in frisky air

All is well for a moment
Until voiced, its moans and groans.
The wind forgets its whisper,
Rather, invokes its thunderous blowings.

Cuddled in arms, his teddy bear,
Though chinkle ignites chilled fear;
It’s musical intent, now unwelcome,
Until from silence breath is dared.

Then, past are whispers and tangling chimes,
The midnight moanings, the hidden grind
of branches pawing tin;
When out from covers steps the child,
Bearing Teddy under chin.

[This message has been edited by miscellanea (02-19-2008 12:17 AM).]

Artic Wind
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1 posted 2008-02-18 09:18 PM

Windsongs tease in tangle
jingle jangle, alight and disappear;
Stars ring the chime of night
Tingling pewter in frisky air.."

I saw that all in my head!

Very Descriptive Misc!

ARCTIC WIND

Life isn't just given to you
Life is about Creating it ......
-Arctic Wind

miscellanea
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2 posted 2008-02-18 09:29 PM

Glad you liked the description... The wind chimes are very active this weekend so I thought I'd try to write the sounds I'm hearing.

Thanks for your kind response, Arctic Wind.

Alison

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3 posted 2008-02-19 02:51 AM

I heard them as I was reading. I like this, Miscellanea. It's a bit different and it kind of just captivated me.

A

effjayel
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since 2007-09-30

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4 posted 2008-02-19 04:37 AM

Misc, you did a god job, I guessed it was wind chimes before I got to the end..enjoyed

John

Shadow_Singer
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5 posted 2008-02-19 06:08 AM

I really like this

Margherita
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6 posted 2008-02-19 07:19 AM

Dear Misc, you made the wind chimes resound within my breast and ... you increased the longing for my daughter's home in Belgium, she has them too and I love to listen to them.

Beautiful!!

love and hugs
Margherita

Marge Tindal

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7 posted 2008-02-19 07:50 AM

Misc~
Lady ... this just rocks~
I LOVE wind chimes ... the melodic songs they bring to mind captivate me~

GREAT JOB !!!!

*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

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Earth Angel
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8 posted 2008-02-19 08:54 AM

I love wind chimes! ~ as well as your entrancing poem about them!

You did a delightful job of writing about these wind songs! Their music always touches my spirit. I especially enjoy the gentle tinkling in a spring or summer breeze whilst lying in my bed at night with my window open. The sound is so soothing and comforting and I have the most pleasant dreams.

A lovely penning, Ms Misce'

Linda

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