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FOR ARTIC WIND INSPIRED BY HALLOWED BY DARKNESS
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FOR ARTIC WIND INSPIRED BY HALLOWED BY DARKNESS |
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dollmaker Member
since 2006-08-30
Posts 155mass dorchester |
I PRAYED THAT I WOULD FIND LIGHT, BUT MY HEART IS STILL DARK AS NIGHT, COLD TEARS ARE RUNNING DOWN MY CHEEKS, I WALK ALONG THE SILENT STREETS, KNOWING THAT MY HEART WHILE FROZEN STILL BEATS. I TRY TO WASH MY SINS IN THE BLACK SEA, BUT EVEN THE WATER DOES NOT SEEM TO LIKE ME. EVEN THE BIRDS WON'T SING FOR ME. THIS PAIN IN MY HEART STINGS LIKE A BEE. I AM DYING INSIDE, WITH PAIN THAT I CANNOT HIDE. ALL BECAUSE TO MY LOVER I LIED. HE CRIED AS HE WALKED AWAY FROM ME, I WAS BLIND FOR HIS LOVE I COULD NOT SEE, WHY ME! I SHOUT AS I WADE IN THE BLACK SEA. I AM INTO DEEP THERE BLACKNESS ALL AROUND ME, WELL I GUESS I AM GONE AND LOVE WILL NEVER BE FOR U AND ME!! |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
wow this is amazing i love this as well as arctic winds poem. AW poem fits your perfectly! this is going in my library! Love it!! keep up the good work!! ~Zach~ |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Very Descriptive! Love the Idea! I am Happy My poem Inspired you to write this one! Thanks ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Falling Rain- Thank you so Much! ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Oh, yes! It is very apparent that you were inspired by AW's poem! I very much enjoyed your interpretation of it! Brava!   EA |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
no problem AW! i love reading your work. keep them coming! lol ~Zach~ |
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