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Open Poetry #42

Just a Short One

DennisTheMenace
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since 2005-09-04

Posts 240

0 posted 2008-02-17 04:04 PM

I saw the ice there
But it was along my way,
Then I slipped there.

30 seconds gone
and a sore bottom also
then I was moving on.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2008-02-17 04:12 PM

DennisTheMenace,

This is a nice little rhyming poem.

Bobby

DennisTheMenace
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since 2005-09-04

Posts 240

2 posted 2008-02-17 04:21 PM

Thanks Robert, didn't actually think about the rhyming, just trying to keep it short and to the point.

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

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3 posted 2008-02-17 04:55 PM

You, too?!? My bottom is still hurtin' from slipping on the ice! It's a winter wonderland out there in my neck of the woods! ~ But underneath all that beautiful snow is some menacing ice!!! lol

Perhaps you and I should put a pillow in our pants!

TomMark
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since 2007-07-27

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4 posted 2008-02-17 05:29 PM

Good laugh!! on your pain!!!

But take care. your bone shall not get hurt.

DennisTheMenace
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since 2005-09-04

Posts 240

5 posted 2008-02-17 06:34 PM

Thanks EA, A pillow is a good idea.

Thanks Tom

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