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Open Poetry #42
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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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0 posted 2008-02-17 12:41 PM

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Spring—is on the march—

Rain rivers over icicles
On wooden eaves


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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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1 posted 2008-02-17 12:48 PM

Huan Yi,

Good one.  I'm happy spring is on the March.  That's clever, and well put.

Bobby
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
2 posted 2008-02-17 12:50 PM

lovely

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3 posted 2008-02-17 12:51 PM

very interesting way of welcoming spring.
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secondhanddreampoet
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4 posted 2008-02-17 03:15 PM

a most effective Zen impression!

Winter—resists—

A rain-glaze mirror
forms on fence and
frozen ground

applause for this vicissitudinary
seasons 'penning!'
TomMark
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since 2007-07-27
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5 posted 2008-02-17 05:03 PM

Winter-is on Fall-

Rain rivers over icicles
On wooden eaves
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