Open Poetry #42 |
Aftermath |
passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I'm at the point in my life now where I don't really care- I can be daring, different, my own, and laugh at those who stare. I can color my hair a funky orangey sunset tone. I can jump a moving train, leaving you very much alone. I can be accident prone, and kiss a stranger on the street, man or woman, and passionately so, and knock them off their feet. I can be drunk and disorderly, another night in the clink is nothing to me now and I don't care what you think. I'm tired of being settled and predictable. I want to bust out and be the shock that you talk about over dinner over the routine tick tock of the clock. Life's too short and people distort, no time's too soon to plow another path, to make your mark and leave people yearning for more of you in the aftermath. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Rah, rah, rah! Siss boom bah! Gosh, there's some of that in me as well! ~ But, I'm a teensy bit more restrained ~ but that is not necessarily a good thing! lol Be free to be who you are! Be true to yourself! Love the spirit of this write, Darlin' Dixie! P.S. The shock factor can be a hoot, can't it?!? lol Linda |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665 |
All i can say is thank god that you are not different? If you were well you just wouldnt be you? I like you just as you are Dixie..a fine poet and friend..thank you.. Goldenrose. Ring out, wild bells, to the wild sky, ring out the old, ring in the new,ring out the false, ring in the true..A Lord Tennyson |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Powerful stuff PS ARCTIC WIND |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Passing shadows, That's a good, and healthy attitude. Don't let anyone tell you different. Bobby |
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DennisTheMenace Member
since 2005-09-04
Posts 240 |
Nice poem, interesting attitude |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
you go girl ... ! loved this write from you Dixie... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
glad ya'll liked this though it was just a passing mood of mine I don't think I'd ever really do those things LOL |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yanno? I've been fighting the urge to go get piercings lately... y'think we can blame it on the moon? (In my case it's textbook midlife crisis, lovie.) The urge passes. Maybe. Enjoyed. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
K, go ahead and get the piercings it's nothing you can't change later if you want, holes grow back in maybe that's what it is with me too...a midlife thing. I hate to admit that so we'll blame it on the moon |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
This is great, a wonderful piece. It sounds like a grand idea. K |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Dare to be different....If I had enough hair I would have a multicolored mohican.... |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Life is too short indeed , I say do whatever fills the need Hope |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
i am adding it to my library...you have danced with the words and made us dance with seer delight...be accident prone ...that is the way to be. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You know, Dixie, it all sounds like a lot of fun. I love your poetry and listening in as you grow. A |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This one has such a great rhythm, Dixie. Very funny mood. I am rather crazy too, so I understand (except getting drunk, which won't happen to me, as I simply don't like that stuff). love and hugs, Poetess! Margherita |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
I love the way you end this one. And I agree all the way through, though of course I will never do that. But I admire it in others. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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