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Prayer of Please

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2008-02-17 10:47 AM

Prayer of Please

please
send me the things I need
speed
could I have the faith of Job
cloak me in this robe
I need your amazing grace
as I stand in empty space
I am weak I am so torn
hanging on threads worn
dangling by such thin rope
help me keep my faith
for I have lost my hope

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

1 posted 2008-02-17 10:51 AM

How I love this poem. It sounded so frustrated but hi, dear lady, you just got a Big A

Yes, we need pray when we feel that we lost hope.

simon
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since 2008-01-14

Posts 440
London, England

2 posted 2008-02-17 11:01 AM

great & very apt on a Sunday...

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2008-02-17 11:10 AM

That was an extremely powerful prayer! ~ and you conveyed a sense of desperation and helplessness, very well!

I believe that a knot will soon appear at the end of that rope, followed by a ladder to get you back up where you rightfully belong.

Linda

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2008-02-17 11:31 AM

I know how you feel

I woke up today feeling it myself

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

5 posted 2008-02-17 12:19 PM

Prayers .....

ARCTIC WIND

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2008-02-17 07:00 PM

Prayers are good...choices become clearer...James

Robert Frazier
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since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

7 posted 2008-02-17 09:43 PM

pleading...for you

Angel4aKing
Senior Member

since 2006-09-27

Posts 1372
USA

8 posted 2008-02-18 07:23 PM

I really undeerstood this one, but unerneath it all I have to believe we are all very blessed. Take care.

~~~kingsangel~~~

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