Open Poetry #42 |
Sight |
soul drifter Senior Member
since 2004-09-08
Posts 711Colorado |
Sight A single blue star in the spilled ink sky uncovering clues of who we are and maybe just why Sarah darling, queen firefly of this town you bring up the moon just to pull the shade down and let me sleep Damn, I love you you get it right only you are true the only thing in sight Taste the night air all the evidence of autumn is breezing through her hair as I hear the green fields hum I watch her jump from cloud to cloud screaming our love into the dawn and my heart beat so proud in the grooves of her song Sarah girl, goddess of my everything you finger paint the dawn such lovely light you bring all I wanna do is... I wanna be your favorite song I wanna take you and wring out all the wrong I wanna decorate your hair with dew and never ever let my eyes lose sight of you 'cause only you are true damn, I love you you restore my sight make me feel all right and you leave me dreaming of life's beloved meaning I've found here within you damn, Sarah honey, I love you. "Some rides don't have much of a finish; |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
Straight forward and well written. Enjoyed. K |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
"Damn" boy you are in love! Some really captivating imagery. love Margherita |
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