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Hollowed By Darkness
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Hollowed By Darkness |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
 Hollowed By Darkness Darkness fills her mind as everything inside is empty. Alone in silence, she suffers -- paying for her sins. Along the shore, crows circle around her in endless flocks -- blocking out the moon. Slowly she sheds a tear that slips into the ocean in silence. No love is left inside of her soul and heart for she is hollowed by Darkness. ARCTIC WIND |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Artic Wind This is a very nice picture, and the poem is well written. However, no one is completely hollowed by darkness. Bobby |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
bobby- Just look at it as a "Poetic" saying! lol thank you! ARCTIC WIND |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very nice writing and beautiful picture, Artic Wind. Ida |
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iliana Member Patricius
since 2003-12-05
Posts 13434USA |
Chilling writing, Artic Wind. Very reflective of the amazing picture you put with it, too! *hugs*....jo |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
It's Sunday morning, it's a little bit sunny & all was well. Then I read this powerful, dark & very well written piece & I'm going to have to go back to bed, slightly worried. Thanx? |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
wow!! wonderful Arctic! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
Gorgeous presentation! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Brrrrrrrrrr, this is indeed chilling to the bone, dear Arctic Wind. It is no doubt well done, if your intention was just that ... to chill us! When no love is left inside, darkness can become very disquieting indeed. I hope whoever or whatever inspired you to write this will quickly find the way back into the Light. love Margherita |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Marchmadness- Thank you! I am glad you liked my poem ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Ilianna- Thanks  hugs ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Simon- Thank you so much  ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
RDB- Thank you for saying its wonderful! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Amusemi- Thank you! glad you enjoyed it ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Margherita- lol, No its all good, I was inspired from the picture it's self. Thanks ARCTIC WIND |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Arctic Wind, great poem, great picture much enjoyed. Lindsay |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Well my response has finally got through, My last four respones would not register and I was becoming quite frustrated so lets hope the problem has been fixed. I have enjoyed all your poems. well done. Lindsay |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
LinsdayP- Thank you! and yes, Hope the problem will be fixed! ARCTIC WIND |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
hollowness is personified |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Poddarku- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem! ARCTIC WIND |
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dollmaker Member
since 2006-08-30
Posts 155mass dorchester |
I LOVE THIS POEM... VERY SAD AND DEEP. DOLLMAKER |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
this poem and picture just inspired me to draw a picture. i love this poem!!! Good job its meaning in this poem chills me to the bone everytime i read this. Good Job!!! ~Zach~ |
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dollmaker Member
since 2006-08-30
Posts 155mass dorchester |
i have written poem for you please read and enjoy! dollmaker |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
The romance is palpable. Wonderful picture, and I love the poem. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Dollmaker- Thank you! for clicking on my poem and Enjoying the mood of the poem! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Falling rain- Thanks! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
DollMaker- yes I see! Thank you for doing that! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
JamesMichael- Thank you! ARCTIC WIND |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Pilgrimage- Thanks ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
The painting is magnificent ~ as well as your poem! I was pondering the title, and came to the realization as to how poetic it truly is. Darkness can swallow up one's heart and soul ~ leaving them empty and hollow. A fine write!  EA |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
EA- Yes it can,! LOL, Thank you for the sweet Reply! ARCTIC WIND |
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