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lucky
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since 2000-01-17
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0 posted 2008-02-16 06:28 PM



waking to a beautiful mess
of tangled dreams with tears of years
oh sigh discovered I left love inside whisper
soft wonders why you left so quickly was I so
close getting to feel & hear I your breathing
you haven't my world left not quite yet
you could move in you know
but I know the
day

pulls
away when
early dawn waking

comes coffee perks in rhythmic
songs aroma creeps to wake within night

so long has worried been wipe the tear from sleepy
eye another day is come alive pull the hair from tangled
place paint a smile upon a face all to quick the morning
goes shuffle through a cluttered mould searching for
some missing shoe way to early for the blue
skies drawn curtains wrong
sweeping

in

comes brighter
song collapse on bed half
past dread time is come to rest
your head find what's lost get
it back before you wake
from needed
nap


© Copyright 2008 Dale W. Gwaltney - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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Eternity
1 posted 2008-02-16 07:08 PM


quote:
waking to a beautiful mess
of tangled dreams with tears of years
oh sigh discovered I left love inside whisper



how beautifully you describe Rosemary's morning!

Very much enjoyed this.
love
Margherita

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2008-02-16 07:14 PM


Now here's a man who really pays attention to his wife and knows all her likes, nuances, habits ~ and smiles all the while he's observing her ~ and with such affection!


Linda

Martie
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3 posted 2008-06-05 04:49 PM


"waking to a beautiful mess"

Hi Dale and Rosemary...I miss you!

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

4 posted 2008-06-05 05:01 PM


Your writing is just..magical!

it's like confetti that dances in unison.

I love reading you, and miss you when you are gone.

Hugs to the family lovie!

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