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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2008-06-01 07:28 AM

the reassurance of stone
when you were bare backed alone
against your favorite brick wall
and you had your velvet eyes on

the light didn't seem to bother you
something about boheme warm
and shadows in your bath
gave you laughter kind

that came around again often
when you looked back at then
and saw the girl woman's smile
on your own lip rooms brim

forbidden was just another name
that slipped from your tongue
not a shape you feared to know
only the familiarity of knowing it

if a stranger heard your whisper

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daark

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-06-01 11:57 AM

What a captivating title for an equally captivating poem, dear D.!

quote:
... if a stranger heard your whisper

It's good to know there are strangers who can surprise us with their deep sensitivity!

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2008-06-01 12:33 PM

ms mar, thanks lady friend...just a place I go in my mind sometimes...

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

3 posted 2008-06-01 10:22 PM

"forbidden was just another name
that slipped from your tongue
not a shape you feared to know
only the familiarity of knowing it"

this is so intriguing, compelling the reader to relish it as we run over and over it in our minds...well done

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

4 posted 2008-06-02 02:31 AM

D,

This is so touching. Your poetry spans the pixels and the miles to touch so many of us.

Thank you.
A

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2008-06-02 02:51 AM

mmmm.... velvet eyes.. so beautiful Mr Daark... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Gentle Spirit
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since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

6 posted 2008-06-02 05:51 AM

if a stranger heard your whisper
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darn man, that line is beautiful.
The places that your mind goes is such a beautiful thing to behold. Hugs babe.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

7 posted 2008-06-02 05:57 AM

steavenr, thanks amigo.

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ms ali-san, thanks lil one for being close here

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ms gs, thanks donna for the touch and the smile

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ms r&b, thank you special lady

bel1e
Senior Member

since 2006-07-24

Posts 1631

8 posted 2008-06-05 07:02 AM

quote:
forbidden was just another name
that slipped from your tongue
not a shape you feared to know
only the familiarity of knowing it

if a stranger heard your whisper

...ah ... this is classic daark...as seductive and brilliant as it gets~~~

~sweet, sweet stuff~~~~

graeshine2006
Member

since 2008-06-03

Posts 368
The Prairie Lands, USA

9 posted 2008-06-05 04:30 PM

I have to admit... I want to know more about this poem.

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

10 posted 2008-06-05 04:48 PM

ms bel1e, thanks daughter of dark pleasure...

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ms shine...just ask ms...just ask, thanks lady

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