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Confliction |
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Michyla Junior Member
since 2008-02-06
Posts 15qld, australia. |
Confliction dont let me take your life away i know ill certainly try dont let me break you heart that way i know i will, you dont know why? cause im not the person you knew im just another player cause im not the one meant for you im just not gonna care. aren't you gonna save yourself from the pain commin' your way? aren't you gonna save yourself from the lies i always say? please dont fall in love with me you know ill break your heart please dont create your fantasy you know we'll fall apart. the sun is for the days.. the moon for the nights.. but you are forever. |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
You are making strides in your poetry. Keep up the good work. Keep writing. Sounds like an Early Warning System is on alert to me. Alison |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Michyla You have the prospect of being really good should you continue like this. You have planted the seed, now nurture it...good job John |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
How arrogant!!! Love the read. |
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