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Robert Frazier
Senior Member

since 2003-02-06

Posts 1014

0 posted 2008-02-14 10:31 PM

I ache to be with you
and for what it’s worth
for all that’s in this world
batters too much
the hope of my self-will
Don’t look upon me with such eyes
as I have upon you
it cannot be
Letting you take possession of me
like burnt letters
becoming black as night
Till the very next time I see you
softer words cannot be found
and I am drowning
in a sea of thoughts
In waves I’ve come to believe
that a love like ours was meant to be
broken

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2008-02-15 12:00 PM

You are flawless, with these surfs of emotion. Compelled to reveal fears, and images of something past.
beautiful flow.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2008-02-15 03:19 AM

wonderful work Robert... love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

3 posted 2008-02-15 07:02 AM

I am drowning
in a sea of thoughts

me too

M

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2008-02-15 09:21 AM

"In waves I’ve come to believe
that a love like ours was meant to be
broken"

sometimes that's true

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

5 posted 2008-02-15 01:08 PM

oh, sad!!!

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

6 posted 2008-02-15 02:28 PM

Robert

What a heart felt stirring write...

I have read this a number of times & wanted to wait to leave a fitting reply, words however fail me...I am stunned.....

Thanks for posting,

John

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

7 posted 2008-02-15 03:00 PM

quote:
Letting you take possession of me
like burnt letters
becoming black as night

You do very well with such imagery...

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