Open Poetry #42 |
Looking for the Wild Rose - just for today, and for all the romantics |
Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Looking for the Wild Rose Who knows where the wild rose grows In rocky crag, or mountainous slag Beside the brook, oh, where should one look? For where would the wild rose grow? The gypsy, she had said to me “Find where the wild rose grows ~ Follow, you see, yon honeybee And search for your wild red rose.” Honeybee and I searched deep valleys Beyond fields so green, we waded streams Following a trance, honeybee and I All for the wild rose dream. We looked so far and wide, you see To find where such a wild rose might grow, But elusive it is, it resides, who knows? Where, indeed, does the wild rose glow? The gypsy said I would find my love That he and I would never part Wherever in secret the wild rose grows Perhaps it blooms only in my lonesome heart. But should you find where the wild rose grows Will you cleverly send me a sign? For I would love the Love that stands Wherever, for that wild rose may still be mine. ©KRJ 3-15-01 revised 3-10-05 Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen? Keeping in mind, I must stand close...and keep my promises... |
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Kristabell Senior Member
since 2003-11-29
Posts 678Portland, OR |
The wild rose is within you. It's eunique, and that is why it is so hard to find, difficult to capture. Beautiful muse. K |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
Beautiful, my dear lady!!! Everyone is looking for the uncontaminated, pure natural love from inside and outside. Beautiful!!! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Sunshine, Wild roses can be found all over, sometimes in the strangest and most surprising places. You'll recognize them when you meet them. Bobby |
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Robert Frazier Senior Member
since 2003-02-06
Posts 1014 |
it grows in a familiar place, beautiful Karilea H, Robert |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Karilea... you write of beauty so well ... love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
I love to stand under this shower of romantic words, dear Karilea. Truly beautiful! love Margherita |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I use to have wild rose bushes on my property that were here many years before I came. Wish I still had them. M |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Karilea, I think you do know that the wild rose grows within but how well you have penned this to make others know. Lovely! Helen |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Sheer poetry! Just like the romantic poets wrote in days of yore! A present day classic! ~ and as lovely as a wild rose. Love & Sun Light, Linda |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Roses thrive on Sunshine!!!! |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a most grand-fine 'penning!' I am especially fond of: "The gypsy said I would find my love That he and I would never part Wherever in secret the wild rose grows Perhaps it blooms only in my lonesome heart." serious, sustained applause!! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautifully Written SUNSHINE! ARCTIC WIND |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
not so much on the surface but deep inside I am still a romantic and I truly appreciated this one lovely beauty here |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a gorgeous write, lady Sunshine! Thank you for sweetly scenting midnite's evening! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nice...James |
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