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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2008-01-27 03:56 PM


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If I must go
Let it be in autumn—

Moon rising


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© Copyright 2008 John Pawlik - All Rights Reserved
secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2008-01-27 04:33 PM


I concur!...

fine Zen!!

Bobby Jordan
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2 posted 2008-01-27 05:12 PM


Huan Yi,

Good one.  I got a kick out of it.

Picky-Picky-Picky.

Please stick around a bit.

Bobby

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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3 posted 2008-01-27 08:38 PM


beautiful John.... but here's to a few more autumn's with us yet please.. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Artic Wind
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4 posted 2008-01-27 09:35 PM


Very Much Enjoyed

ARCTIC WIND

TomMark
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5 posted 2008-01-28 12:29 PM


if I must leave
let it be spring--

Butterflies wing

secondhanddreampoet
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6 posted 2008-07-04 06:08 PM


excellent Zen worth 'revisiting!'

continuing applause!

Marchmadness
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7 posted 2008-07-06 04:18 AM


I'm rather partial to Autumn, myself. John.
                                   Ida

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