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Open Poetry #42

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Grinch
Member Elite

since 2005-12-31

Posts 2929
Whoville

0 posted 2008-02-12 08:17 PM

You, in the no, sans expression,
All face, yet faceless;
All grace in stillness
Through sepia's veil.

You, on the down of depression
All sighs and listless
Miss “mind your own business”.
A snap of a wail.

You, that defies comprehension,
A picture of greatness;
A smile that’s contagious.
Serenity blazing your trail.

[This message has been edited by Grinch (02-12-2008 09:20 PM).]

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

1 posted 2008-02-12 08:21 PM

Dear Grinch, I love this one. This poem is very emotional. Have I ever offended you?
Always good poems.

love the read. I am till reading Dylan Thomas.

Grinch
Member Elite

since 2005-12-31

Posts 2929
Whoville

2 posted 2008-02-12 08:36 PM

Thanks TomMark.

Have you ever offended me?

Not as far as I know but if you’ve been trying to and I missed it I apologise.

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

3 posted 2008-03-03 11:49 PM

Some poems just rise to the top.
I think this is one of them

Alison

LadyTom
Member

since 2008-02-29

Posts 353
LA, CA

4 posted 2008-03-04 12:04 PM

Still feel the strong emotions from you, Grinch.

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