Open Poetry #42 |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
. When I said I hadn't done it You said that isn't true Who are you trying to kid I know you did Because someone has been watching you... You see, I have had you followed Everywhere that you have been Now I have got the proof So why don't you admit the truth Because I'm telling you that you've been seen... All right, I hold my hands up You have got me bang to rights It is because I am so old And have been feeling the cold That I have been wearing your tights....... |
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simon Member
since 2008-01-14
Posts 440London, England |
Love the way you set this up so that it goes from a brooding 'Big Brotherish' paranoia to a genuinly funny ending. Enjoyed... |
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Bobby Jordan Member
since 2007-08-13
Posts 491Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
John, Funny. This one is well played out. Bobby |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Thanks Guys...glad to have put a smile on your faces.. Cheers John |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
cute |
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TomMark Member Elite
since 2007-07-27
Posts 2133LA,CA |
gooooood. and funny. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thanks for the smiles! love Margherita |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Passing S, glad it worked for you Margherita, That makes me happy ( smiling here) to hear it made you smile... Tomtoo Thanks & I have to fess up here, it is a true story & Yes it was me....Noooo, not the being followed bit, that was made up... Many moons ago I used to work outdoors in this wicked english weather and it was the only way to keep my dangly bits ( that would be legs Thomas !) warm when I was 40 feet up a ladder... See I don't always be sad, I dedicate this funny one to you for replying to the good & bad stuff I make you read....Thank You kind Sir... |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
This was great! A smart man, puts his well being before his ego...or his tights! |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Thanks TD, I'm just glad I did not fall off the ladder & end up in the ER room, the tights I could getaway with I think, but how would I explain the bra !!! LOL... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You had me going there, for awhile! Then the hilarious conclusion! lol In the past, I have worn my wasband's long john's in sub-zero weather! ~ Even to bed! Hmmm, I wonder if that is the reason why he is now my 'X'. Loves 'n laughs, Linda |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
Linda Was husband? That's a new one on me..way I hear it, reason was Him wearing your dress at the mall, no???? *grin* |
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