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effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

0 posted 2008-02-12 08:04 AM

There is a special feeling
That I have in my heart for you
Which fills me to bursting point inside
When I gaze into those eyes
So Big & Bright & Blue.....

I know the feeling's mutual
As yet another smile lights up your face
And all of lifes little problems
Simply disappear without trace

Now each day brings memories anew
To be savoured for all time
And Rhiannon it is down to you,

Sweet Blue eyed child of mine.....

.

Paul Wilson

Member Elite

since 2002-07-07

Posts 4711
United States

1 posted 2008-02-12 08:48 AM

John...Very tender write, enjoyed my friend...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

2 posted 2008-02-12 09:11 AM

Paul Thanks, your comment is appreciated, have a good day..John

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-02-12 09:24 AM

quote:
I know the feeling's mutual
As yet another smile lights up your face
And all of lifes little problems
Simply disappear without trace

How precious and tender, dear John. I recognize the feeling ... my two little grandsons provide the same.

love
Margherita

Bobby Jordan
Member

since 2007-08-13

Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

4 posted 2008-02-12 10:00 AM

John,

"Rhiannon" is a great name for a kid. I like the poem too. I'd like it better if it was left justified. That would make it easier to read.

Bobby

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

5 posted 2008-02-12 10:14 AM

Thanks Bobby, appreciate it......

John

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2008-02-12 11:36 AM

awww

what a touching piece

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

7 posted 2008-02-12 11:41 AM

I do believe that both you and your daughter Rhiannon are God's Gifts to the other!

...Still smiling, here!

Linda

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

8 posted 2008-02-12 11:54 AM

beautiful, beautiful, beautiful.
What a loving father!!!

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

9 posted 2008-02-12 01:02 PM

Awwww , beautiful to read , this was so sweet indeed

Hope

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

10 posted 2008-02-12 03:37 PM

Passing Shadows, very kind , Thanks!

John

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

11 posted 2008-02-12 03:38 PM

Linda

That is appreciated so much, I love it when I make you smile....John

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

12 posted 2008-02-12 03:39 PM

Tomtoo

Thank You,Thank You,Thank You, What a lovely Man...

Cheers

John

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

13 posted 2008-02-12 03:41 PM

Hope

Glad you enjoyed it, She does bring out the 'Sloppy' side of me !

Thanks for looking in

John

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

14 posted 2008-02-12 05:32 PM

Wonderfulo...James

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

15 posted 2008-02-12 05:33 PM

Thanks James, appreciate your visit.....

John

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

16 posted 2008-02-12 10:11 PM

Beautiful words for that blue eyed child.

Wonderful write, much enjoyed.

Lindsay

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