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Open Poetry #42

Only Heartache

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-02-12 05:32 AM

Only Heartaches

Love can be shared in
the softness of a kiss.
Love is like the winds
a gentle caress of tenderness.
Love can come like falling rain
tap,tap, tapping lovers upon shoulders.
Love can be felt and enjoyed
but possession is out of order.
Never make that mistake,
only heartaches will
accompany that mistake.

JamesLee
11February
2008

[This message has been edited by JamesMichael (02-12-2008 07:32 AM).]

effjayel
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since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

1 posted 2008-02-12 06:03 AM

JM

We can never posess something that has a mind of it's own,

We can only enjoy sharing it for the moment.......

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-02-12 07:07 AM

Very wise reasoning within softly caressing words, dear James.

love
Margherita

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2008-02-12 07:34 AM

Thank you effjayel and Margherita for the wonderful responses...I changed it around a bit for my pleasure...hope you still like it...James

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2008-02-12 08:59 AM

so true

enjoyed this bit of wisdom

amusemi
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since 2001-12-08

Posts 1262
A State of Disarray

5 posted 2008-02-12 09:04 AM

I agree...

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

6 posted 2008-02-12 09:08 AM

My pleasure also James, much-o better !

Bobby Jordan
Member

since 2007-08-13

Posts 491
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

7 posted 2008-02-12 09:15 AM

James,

What's with the colored font? I can't read it.

Bobby

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

8 posted 2008-02-14 03:06 AM

Thank you passing shadows, amusemi, effjayel and Bobby for the nice responses...
Bobby the color is gold...it looks nice on my computer but perhaps not the same on some others...James

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