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wordwizard
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since 2003-09-08
Posts 483
on the way to next world

0 posted 2008-02-11 09:59 PM


Why should it matter
some will fancy
influence to sour
sugared lips
sent virtually
if it were real

you would feel
then ask questions
to have to answer
romantic objections
when life is your own
rose garden petals fall
raped of its bloom

sugared lips do tarnish
after rain drops fall
sent virtually
you would feel
unreal
romantic discomfort
why should it matter?
when real sugared lips
are fancied.



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Between the Lines
1 posted 2008-02-12 09:01 AM


just smiling
M

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