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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. Orange breasted robins And cardinals With bright red wings Cloud white swans That moved in pairs Along the shore The lapping of waves On colored pebbles Polished smooth with time Ships passing the lighthouse Out of Sault Sainte Marie It was July with fireflies Over long green summer lawns Crickets chirping their tunes The whole night through Not that then Anyone Was actually Listening For being young And very much in love We had better things to do . |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
 love this!! you painted a beautiful picture here *sighs* |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Magnificent view of pardise! Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
But you remembered! And so beautifully, that I want to put this into my library. Love, Margherita  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
John, This is an excellent Great Lakes poem. It's a beautiful area. Of course, you didn't notice that either. Bobby |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan |
. Thank you all Yes Bobby, we were as many others in love then pre-occupied yet I seem to remember . . . Thanks again John . |
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