Open Poetry #42 |
Angelo Shoots Hoops- (The Lonliness of the Midnight Hoopster) |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Angelo shoots hoops well past midnight. The thump-thump-thump dulls his senses. He’s all alone on the court. He doesn’t have to think about what’s going down at home. Thump-thump-thump. Bobby |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Angelo was lucky to have a distraction. Ida |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yes dear Ida, Able bodied boys are fortunate that way. Bobby |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Those thumps echo right into my heart. Linda |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Linda, I'm pleased this poem worked for you. Yes, the thump-thump-thump does sound like a heart beating. It's a sad thing for Angelo, being out there all alone. He can’t go home. Bobby |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Sounds like something I used to do. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks XGarapanX, Good for you. Shooting hoops is a good thing to do. It's a great distraction. Bobby |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you Bobby, all my youth I played soccer or tennis with friends when i had some time, It was a really good time.... have a nice day yann |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
Shooting hoops is a good way for kids to survive in bad neighborhoods. |
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