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Open Poetry #42
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aZMERE bOHEMIAN nOMAD
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since 2008-07-07
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I live in the uk but dreaming of a place across the channel
0 posted 2008-07-07 06:12 PM


How sweet the taste,
of bitter ills,
a twist of fate,
as body chills,
this course of life,
its pulsing vein,
one surely doubts,
thou shall remain.
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AAB
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since 2008-04-10
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1 posted 2008-07-07 06:44 PM

love it.
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
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2 posted 2008-07-07 06:47 PM

Yes! This one too is very lovely.

Love,
Margherita
XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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3 posted 2008-07-09 04:36 PM

It really is lovely. It expresses a very fitting train of thought right down to the conclusion. Well done.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·
Marchmadness
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4 posted 2008-07-11 01:21 AM

Short but filled with meaning.
                       Ida
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