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Margherita
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Eternity

0 posted 2008-07-05 06:49 AM

Spirit of flight by Josephine Wall
*

I will not make a sound

*

How glorious our journey
through the meadows of time!
How graceful our dance
through the seasons of life!
How deep our bond rooted
in the space of beyond!

When my wings
will require to slow down
and I will be standing
at the edge of the abyss
beckoning with its promise
of sweet oblivion,
I will effortlessly slip
through the gates
leading into
that secret garden
you tended with care
since forever
with the fragrance
of your love.

I will not make a sound
when I will fold my wings
and take the leap,
for I trust universe
and your soul
to soar with me
through the dark of night,
to wrap me
in their reviving
particles of light.

And before long,
in the hush of eternity,
we shall remember
our song
... our very own,
inimitable song.

No, I will not make a sound ...
but I will find the sweet echoes
of our unique journey
across the meadows of time
and forever I will be aware
of the gift of you ...
...of you,
my incomparable you ...

*

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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1 posted 2008-07-05 06:58 AM

oh my !!!!!!!! Margherita!!!! you are such a gift to us here on our pages blue..... this is beautiful! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

2 posted 2008-07-05 08:38 AM

Yo Margherita,

There you goes, that's the spirit Hon.

Love Bobby

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

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Durban, South Africa

3 posted 2008-07-05 09:03 AM

This is exquisite, Margherita. I want to read this on the day I die (and often before!).

- Owl

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19

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Antarctica

4 posted 2008-07-05 09:04 AM

A beautiful poem with a beautiful image to match.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

miscellanea
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OH

5 posted 2008-07-05 01:03 PM

Margherita,

Breathtakingly beautiful! Another keeper... Enjoyed!

~miscee~

HopeS
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Perth Western Australia

6 posted 2008-07-05 01:55 PM

Beautiful loving vision

Hope

2islander2
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by the sea

7 posted 2008-07-05 02:06 PM

Hello Margherita, It is so sweet and beautiful, You recall us that there is not such wonderful step that to trust someone for walking in the paths of Life....
Another gem of you to step forward...

thanks

yann

Ericc
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8 posted 2008-07-05 03:47 PM

Beautiful!!

Love,
Eric

Alison

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9 posted 2008-07-05 04:14 PM

You swept me away with you, my darling friend. I just was washed in the beauty of your poem.

xoxoox
Alison

JamesMichael
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10 posted 2008-07-05 07:51 PM

You have a gift of acceptance and appreciation...James

inkedgoddess
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11 posted 2008-07-05 07:53 PM

soundless
is bliss
in your warm words here

LindsayP
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Australia, Victoria

12 posted 2008-07-05 10:23 PM

You done yourself proud with this beautiful

post Margherita, as only you could write

it. A big hug my dear. Love to you.

Lindsay

Richy
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

13 posted 2008-07-06 12:16 PM

The silence in this piece screamed
sighs of joy!

As always, another beautiful touch
from your heart.

Beautiful Margherita!

Rich

Margherita
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Eternity

14 posted 2008-07-06 06:37 AM

Thank you all my dear Poet friends. Your kind and loving comments brought joy.

Have a wonderful Sunday!

Love and joy.
Margherita

Marchmadness
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15 posted 2008-07-06 07:12 PM

This is just beautiful beyond words, Margharita.
Ida

secondhanddreampoet
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a 'Universalist' !

16 posted 2008-07-06 08:13 PM

This 'penning' is quite fine...

I am particularly fond of the beginning
[which seems to capture the spirit of
'Universalism']:

"How glorious our journey
through the meadows of time!
How graceful our dance
through the seasons of life!
How deep our bond rooted
in...space...beyond"

applause!!

graeshine2006
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since 2008-06-03

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The Prairie Lands, USA

17 posted 2008-07-06 11:18 PM

"I will not make a sound
when I will fold my wings
and take the leap,
for I trust universe
and your soul
to soar with me
through the dark of night,
to wrap me
in their reviving
particles of light."

OHHHHH I love that... it is so comforting and beautiful.

And this:

"No, I will not make a sound ...
but I will find the sweet echoes
of our unique journey"

I've never thought of it that way....

This really is beautiful in every way!

Honeybunch
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since 2001-12-29

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South Africa

18 posted 2008-07-07 08:14 AM

"No, I will not make a sound ...
but I will find the sweet echoes
of our unique journey
across the meadows of time
and forever I will be aware
of the gift of you ...
...of you,
my incomparable you ..."

Lovely, Margherita. Oh dear, I feel I should say so much more but I'm speechless. That happens sometimes when I'm listening to the echoes - can't multi-task then, you know.

Helen

Indigo
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19 posted 2008-07-07 02:10 PM

Margherita-

Your muse reverberates in this amazing and heartfelt writing. I absolutely loved it!

Indigo

i_am_patch!
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manila, philippines

20 posted 2008-07-07 05:39 PM

this is exceptional..

very beautiful.

"omnia vincit amor"
LOVE OVERCOMES EVERYTHING

Margherita
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Eternity

21 posted 2008-07-08 11:16 AM

Your loving replies brought smiles, thank you all from my heart for taking the time to read and comment.

Love and joy.
Margherita

KeyLimeSorbet
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22 posted 2008-07-08 04:08 PM

this was a wonderful read :-) much enjoyed

Earth Angel
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23 posted 2008-07-08 04:13 PM

My dear "incomparable you"!!! I love your poetry, the way you see the world, your grace, and your charm. etcetera etcetera

A wonder-full write, Maga Margherita!

XOx Uriah xOX
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24 posted 2008-07-08 05:56 PM

::smiles:: ::bows::

passing shadows
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displaced

25 posted 2008-07-08 09:10 PM

such beauty

Paul Wilson

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26 posted 2008-07-09 08:15 AM

Margherita...Just beautiful. I am in awe of your words. The best i've read in a very long time. Thanks so much for sharing. This one has a special place in my library...Paul

~~To share my poems with you is to share my heart with you~~
Paul

Margherita
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Eternity

27 posted 2008-07-11 07:00 AM

Thank you, dear Poet friends, you have touched my heart.

Love and joy,
Margherita

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