The day's a little darker....

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Open Poetry #42

The day's a little darker....

Topheth
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since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

0 posted 2008-07-07 05:45 PM

The day’s a little darker
without your shining eyes
to share a smile,
to laugh a while
and enjoy what our distance denies.

But night’s a whole lot brighter
wrapped up within your arms,
secret pleasure,
little treasure,
and surrendered to all your charms.

Dawn to day to dusk to night –
always in thought if not in sight.

"You inspire; I desire – and refrain; you sustain."

[This message has been edited by Topheth (07-07-2008 07:48 PM).]

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2008-07-07 05:46 PM

"Dawn to day to dusk to night –
always in thought if not in sight."

this is so sweet

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2008-07-07 06:31 PM

But night’s a whole lot brighter
wrapped up within your arms,
secret pleasure,
little treasure,
and surrender to all your charms.

My favorite lines....

ooo la la.....lol!

scoff
Member

since 2008-07-04

Posts 71
Georgia

3 posted 2008-07-07 07:29 PM

I hope the object of your desire appreciates you. Devotion so complete should be admirably rewarded. Very nicely done.

Topheth
Member

since 2001-09-08

Posts 297
Texas

4 posted 2008-07-07 07:56 PM

Thank you, each, for your gracious comments.

graeshine2006
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since 2008-06-03

Posts 368
The Prairie Lands, USA

5 posted 2008-07-07 11:19 PM

heavy sigh......

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

6 posted 2008-07-08 09:08 AM

another *sigh*

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