Open Poetry #42 |
The day's a little darker.... |
Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
The day’s a little darker without your shining eyes to share a smile, to laugh a while and enjoy what our distance denies. But night’s a whole lot brighter wrapped up within your arms, secret pleasure, little treasure, and surrendered to all your charms. Dawn to day to dusk to night – always in thought if not in sight. "You inspire; I desire – and refrain; you sustain." [This message has been edited by Topheth (07-07-2008 07:48 PM).] |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Dawn to day to dusk to night – always in thought if not in sight." this is so sweet |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
But night’s a whole lot brighter wrapped up within your arms, secret pleasure, little treasure, and surrender to all your charms. My favorite lines.... ooo la la.....lol! |
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scoff Member
since 2008-07-04
Posts 71Georgia |
I hope the object of your desire appreciates you. Devotion so complete should be admirably rewarded. Very nicely done. |
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Topheth Member
since 2001-09-08
Posts 297Texas |
Thank you, each, for your gracious comments. |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
heavy sigh...... |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
another *sigh* |
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