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Inspired-8
Member

since 2008-04-14

Posts 311
Pluto

0 posted 2008-07-01 03:48 PM

If only for

A moment more

To see your smile

And talk awhile

If only I

Could see you now

A little time

If somehow...

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

1 posted 2008-07-01 08:24 PM

Beautiful X 3.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2008-07-06 01:27 AM

Victor... if all our 'if's' came true... we would still yearn for something more I think... a wonderful offering here... keep smiling my friend.. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

3 posted 2008-07-06 02:23 AM

this was sweet!

OwlSA
Member Rara Avis

since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

4 posted 2008-07-06 04:01 AM

Victor, it is good that you can turn your pain into beauty, in the form of this poem that is beautiful in its simplicity like an ancient Greek temple (as opposed to a Roman one). It is good that you have found a release for your pain - and that it is a positive release that is productive of further release in the form of the response of the Pippers here. It is good for us to be able to enjoy your poem and to try to alleviate your pain. Keep writing and you will find in time, that - like the relaxing release that comes after sobbing - you will find a new dawn.

- Owl

[This message has been edited by OwlSA (07-06-2008 06:17 PM).]

Inspired-8
Member

since 2008-04-14

Posts 311
Pluto

5 posted 2008-07-06 04:10 AM

how very sweet thank you Owl!! and my fav Heart and RDB thanks !

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2008-07-08 04:24 AM

Wonderful...James

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

7 posted 2008-07-08 05:16 AM

If only ... sigh! I think all those who have ever experienced love and the missing of it, can relate. And how many are these? Everybody who breathes on this Earth I guess!

May the sighs of sorrow soon transform into sighs of joy again.

Love,
Margherita

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2008-07-08 09:02 AM

yes, I have felt this many times...

beautifully written

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