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Sanctuary |
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i_am_patch! Member
since 2008-06-24
Posts 108manila, philippines 
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listen to the echoes in this room, with four walls filled with memories. shouting calling out to you, what for so long you've been blind to see. open up the door, let the shadows draw back, and you will the whisper of what was left here now. you will feel the cold, the tension, the numbing shiver in your spine a haunting spirit of what used to be a past that could not get free.. here in this sanctuary, i wrote in the walls,still imprinted; songs from my heart.. the sun, the star, and the day in the rain, they were all causes of my pain. here in this sanctuary, i still come back to speak with your ghost longing,needing, still wont forget this sanctuary where we first and last met.. "omnia vincit amor" |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautifully poignant! Memories become extremely vivid, when we step into such a sanctuary. Love, Margherita |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I like this very much, Patch but then I always enjoy your writing. Ida |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow...that last line got me good nice! |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Hiya PI Girl! Your Island cousin here (The Marianas. I'm half Saipanese and was born and raised out in the Pacific Islands). I have to say that your initial intro spoke of someone who was unsure of their own abiliies and who lacked experiential confidence. Gotta tell you, girl, you lack nothing. You are one of the best, posting along with some of the best. Start swaggering a little, lol! Brett Patrick ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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