Quite another marvelous masterpiece :)

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Open Poetry #42

Quite another marvelous masterpiece :)

PrestonThePoet
Member

since 2007-11-07

Posts 87

0 posted 2008-07-06 11:36 PM

Make me your mannequin.
An elaborate series of strings;
Controlling my every move.
Each tug, a heartbeat;
Feeling tight.
Brittle as ice;
Yet, so tenderly.
You dance me around this veranda.
Never letting me rest,
I sway on each beat
Creating an elegant mood,
Never felt before.
Unfortunately, I lay here.
Watching the sky turn
From night to day,
Strings lying limp.
I’d wished too much.
Each joint cold;
Frozen;
Oh, how do I miss those days.
On that marble balcony;

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

1 posted 2008-07-07 01:21 AM

Love anything you write ,Preston.
Ida

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2008-07-07 08:28 AM

A very touching write of longing!

Love,
Margherita

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

3 posted 2008-07-09 11:25 AM

Wow. That's all I've got to say.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

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