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Open Poetry #42

Postscript

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2008-07-05 08:05 PM

Postscript

You tell me that
I'm a lucky man
to kiss your lips
to hold your hand
and I agree with you.
Perhaps you were created
for me and me created for you.
If a man could order
his hearts desire
I would have ordered you,
freely you came into my arms,
fully my desires are
fulfilled by you.

p.s. I love you.

JamesLee
05July
2008

Alison

Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-27

Posts 9318
Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!

1 posted 2008-07-05 09:00 PM

James,

I love how you love her. I love how she loves you. I love how you love each other.

Alison

PS I love this poem

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

2 posted 2008-07-05 10:15 PM

A very sweet poem James.

You wrote it well.

Lindsay

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

3 posted 2008-07-05 11:23 PM

I read four great little messages in this. Each one worth saying.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

4 posted 2008-07-05 11:47 PM

p.s.s. This was great James!

I'm very happy for you!
Rich

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
Member Ascendant

since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

5 posted 2008-07-06 12:19 PM

I'm smiling here James...

this was lovely.. love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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