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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA 
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Hoping you will sore up high Watching Earth through eagle eyes Boundaries infinite Plans not laid Flying high, winds tailor made It is my hope that you will see Humankind, land, the seven seas Time is finite On this earth Until our death and then rebirth So lies the hope that we've been told Where eagle eyes see streets of gold Earthly matters Laid to rest Given all that was our best |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very enjoyable, Debra. Ida |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
Thanks all. |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
May all your hopes be realised. I enjoyed your poem, Debby. - Owl |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Debra, This is beautiful. So glad that I stopped. Alison |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi Deb, wishing all the best for your hopes, hope they come true. Nice write. Prasad |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Some, with open minds, believe in possibility, like reincarnation, for instance. Others, well, their faiths, tell them different, which of course is just a difference of opinon. What do you think, miss shine of star? No pressure of course lol. Oh by the way, really enjoyed the insight here! Rich  |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Life, pain, death, rebirth- So many people are cheated in this life. It's always comforting to believe in a better hereafter. I see it as one of those things that are likely generally true. So many varied people agree on the existence of an afterlife that maybe we know something on the inside, even if we choose not to acknowledge it on the outside. Who is left standing there when we shed this cage of skin? And if there is an eternal person then why not an eternal destiny and perhaps also an eternal destination? Provocative subject. If I have to live for eternity I hope it's not in Smallville. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
Gar - you crack me up. Smallville may not be so bad! Thanks for you reply!!!! |
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chopsticks Senior Member
since 2007-10-02
Posts 888The US, |
Enjoyed your poem. You may enjoy this Go to youtube and punch in: How great is our God by Louie Giglio . Part 1 2 and 3 of course punch part 1 in first. His video is fascinating . It is about the heavens. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
graeshine, This should soar right to the top and into my library! An inspirational poem! ~miscellanea |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A great write Graeshine, I really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work and take care. Lindsay |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh this is beautiful!! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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