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graeshine2006
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0 posted 2008-06-14 02:55 AM


Hoping you will sore up high
Watching Earth through eagle eyes
Boundaries infinite
Plans not laid
Flying high, winds tailor made

It is my hope that you will see
Humankind, land, the seven seas
Time is finite
On this earth
Until our death and then rebirth

So lies the hope that we've been told
Where eagle eyes see streets of gold
Earthly matters
Laid to rest
Given all that was our best


© Copyright 2008 Debra Grae - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2008-06-14 03:06 AM


Very enjoyable, Debra.
                  Ida

graeshine2006
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2 posted 2008-06-14 03:10 AM


Thanks all.
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3 posted 2008-06-14 01:50 PM


May all your hopes be realised.  I enjoyed your poem, Debby.

- Owl

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4 posted 2008-06-14 02:00 PM


Debra,

This is beautiful.  So glad that I stopped.

Alison

Prasad Nataraj
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5 posted 2008-06-14 03:16 PM


Hi Deb, wishing all the best for your hopes, hope they come true. Nice write. Prasad
Richy
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6 posted 2008-07-03 01:13 AM



Some, with open minds, believe in possibility, like reincarnation, for instance.

Others, well, their faiths, tell them different, which of course is just a difference of opinon.

What do you think, miss shine of star?
No pressure of course lol.

Oh by the way, really enjoyed the insight here!

Rich  

XGarapanX
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7 posted 2008-07-03 09:19 AM


Life, pain, death, rebirth- So many people are cheated in this life. It's always comforting to believe in a better hereafter.

I see it as one of those things that are likely generally true. So many varied people agree on the existence of an afterlife that maybe we know something on the inside, even if we choose not to acknowledge it on the outside.

Who is left standing there when we shed this cage of skin? And if there is an eternal person then why not an eternal destiny and perhaps also an eternal destination? Provocative subject.

If I have to live for eternity I hope it's not in Smallville.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

graeshine2006
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8 posted 2008-07-03 01:47 PM


Gar - you crack me up.  Smallville may not be so bad!  Thanks for you reply!!!!
chopsticks
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9 posted 2008-07-04 06:54 AM


Enjoyed your poem. You may enjoy this Go to youtube and punch in:

How great is our God by Louie Giglio . Part 1 2 and 3 of course punch part 1 in first.

His video is fascinating . It is about the heavens.

miscellanea
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10 posted 2008-07-04 05:29 PM


graeshine,

  This should soar right to the top and into my library!  An inspirational poem!

         ~miscellanea

LindsayP
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11 posted 2008-07-06 12:36 PM



A great write Graeshine, I really enjoyed

it. Keep up the good work and take care.

Lindsay

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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12 posted 2008-07-06 12:43 PM


oh this is beautiful!!  love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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