Open Poetry #42 |
Angelo Does KA--BOOM! |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Angelo and his pals have cast the hood in a sulfurous haze with their illegal cherry bombs, bottle rockets, ash cans, and squibs. It’s a war zone out there. Angelo knows Philly’s where all the good stuff started, and he’s going to fill the night with fire, and loads of boom, just because he can. Eat your hearts out. KA—BOOM! KA—BOOM! KA—BOOM! Bobby |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
laughs |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Alison, It's past midnight, and raining. Angelo's still at it. Bobby |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Oh man, I feel so sorry for you .. but if Angelo is having fun and not doing anyone harm .. I have extra ear plugs. xoxoxo Alison |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
yes a vivid picture wrtten well clever talks delay friendship! |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Angelo, like Frodo Baggins, lives forever! ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
very appropriate for the 4th of July, Lovely words too. yann |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Its 10:30p.m. and the fireworks are definately slowing down...I think they're starting to run out of ammunition...James |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Sounds like So. El Monte. Plenty of "KA-BOOM" around here, Ida |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
When Ka-Boom means celebration and not war, then may it last the whole night! Well ... I think I might profit from Alison's offer ... Enjoyed this. Love, Margherita |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Well writ!... from the city where is 'all started'! [I wish this was the 'America'/'democracy' that the 'founding fathers' envisioned though!] Explosive applause for this 'penning'!! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Alison, For the ear plug thought. I enjoy the noise, it lets me know the hood is alive and well. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Poddarku, I'm pleased that you got a bang out of the poem. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks XGarapanX, Angelo and Frodo are second cousins, twice removed. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Yann, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks James, It sound like they are enjoying the fourth in Kapolei. That's great. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Ida, It's great the kids are having a ball where you are at. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Margherita, The noise doesn't bother me. I have bad ears from too much boom--boom years ago. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Secondhanddreampoet, Thanks for the explosive applause. It is what the founding fathers had in mind--what with an African American and a women as possibly leading the nation. Bobby |
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Earl Brinkman Senior Member
since 2010-03-03
Posts 1183Osaka, Japan |
This definitely was a fouth of July post but its good reading even in October! |
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