Love (My attempt at Haiku)

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Open Poetry #42

Love (My attempt at Haiku)

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2008-07-04 07:06 AM

The instant two snowflakes
are merged, they both disappear.
A rose blooms.

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

1 posted 2008-07-04 07:41 AM

I have to dream bigger. Alot of work to do to catch up.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

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Sydney, Australia

2 posted 2008-07-04 07:43 AM

ARH... I do not know much about Haiku and the correct form it should be.. but I think your words along with your beautiful pic is absolutely exquisite

love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

i_am_patch!
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since 2008-06-24

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manila, philippines

3 posted 2008-07-04 08:57 AM

i have to agree with XGarapanX..

"omnia vincit amor"
LOVE OVERCOMES EVERYTHING

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16

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So. El Monte, California

4 posted 2008-07-04 10:42 AM

I have never written a haiku, ARH so I'm not an much of an expert, but I like this very much.
Ida

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

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singapore

5 posted 2008-07-04 12:18 PM

i like the comparison of a couple to snowflakes. heh

Spuddette
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since 2008-07-03

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England

6 posted 2008-07-04 01:28 PM

I love Haiku. This is really sweet. x

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2008-07-04 02:42 PM

Nice attempt! ARH!

ARCTIC WIND

secondhanddreampoet
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since 2006-11-07

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a 'Universalist' !

8 posted 2008-07-04 02:46 PM

fine imagery (poetic and photographic)

[tastefully done!]

applause!!

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

9 posted 2008-07-04 03:40 PM

Not an attempt -
a truly beautiful
expression.

Eric

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