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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2008-07-04 12:43 PM


     


You, yes you, can make me happy,
you know what to do,
how I like it,

You know, poetry,
love sent in emails,
posted on PIP,

We have that connection,
you touch my soul,
as mine touches yours,

Reach out to me more,
you know what to do,
tickle my fancy,

No I didn't say fanny,
but I do like to be,
tickled, excited,

I will run, if you,
chase me,
hard, harder, fast,
faster,

Run, lets hide,
we can play hide~n~seek,
all day, every day,

When our flirtatious games,
are all said and done,
then I will give you,

a great big reward....

but you know what to do,
to please me so,
now get going,

do it, do it good,
do it right,
surprise me tonight.

I'll be waiting for you
to stop by these pages
of blue....

© Copyright 2008 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
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Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy!
1 posted 2008-07-04 01:10 AM


How delightful - now you know we are all gonna be watching too, right?  You make me smile, darlin' and I loved your poem.  May you always be happy and have fun.

A

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2008-07-04 01:40 AM


lol, yes I am playful..Ali...thanks for your kind words...and anyone who speaks the word Darlin..well they are already a friend in my book~

stay tuned lol!

~HugsARH

Margherita
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Eternity
3 posted 2008-07-04 03:41 AM


Another powerful, stirring invitation from you. I think quite a number of hearts experience an acceleration of their beat in reading this!

Love,
Margherita

Inspired-8
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Pluto
4 posted 2008-07-04 05:49 AM


Very beautiful...

[This message has been edited by Inspired-8 (07-04-2008 09:01 PM).]

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19
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Antarctica
5 posted 2008-07-04 07:59 AM


Tantalizing write. How awesome.

·´~`·­»Garapan«­·´~`·

Gentle Spirit
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6 posted 2008-07-04 03:36 PM


beautiful and playful verse here sweetie.  Much enjoyed.
Ericc
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7 posted 2008-07-04 03:44 PM


Intrigueing words!

Eric

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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8 posted 2008-07-05 03:19 AM


oh this was wonderful ARH!  I'll be sure and stay tuned...hmmm.... any hints as to who it can be??  lol...     love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

2islander2
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9 posted 2008-07-05 04:27 AM


Ouah ARH a very seductive poem, enjoyed it very much.

   yann

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