Open Poetry #42 |
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Unwritten Code of Silence from Beyond |
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SilhouetteMarquis Junior Member
since 2008-02-07
Posts 32 |
In this silly little box of mine Lives on a story, clandestine. The comatose to cross the line A burnt out image, where no light shine A spirit's fall into the west These raw emotions, now a test A soul's possessed is truly bless'd Unless the soul is mine. The story starts with simple bliss Love beyond a deceiving kiss. But loving, as these words may say There, lies a cunning force at work The writers, not which the words portray a hatred so much more than this. But the hatred in us never died. It never died. It never died. “It never will” in which she cried As he lay out, she's by his side His hopes and dreams, now garnet floor As a note stood nailed to the door: "Stay away, for you abhor Our journey, which we can't ignore This thickening mist in a shallow moor I hope you've found what you're looking for Our suffering must coincide Because of you, he lives no more Signed Abernathy Elinore" But as told in fellow's local lore Blood from love, and hate inside. But all stories have endings, too For corruption, now a rancid stew Your anguish and disparity Release the pain inside Frustration overwhelms you Where these confusions now preside In which it never dies Our emotions tied to what you do By mourning, we admit the weak (By selfishness, by self regret) To these pages, prematurely torn by pride By burning knives, in which you seek When you die, you fail to see The story has to end with you When all shall hear your lips not speak. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
WELCOME TO PIP! ![]() ![]() ![]() ![]() |
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effjayel Senior Member
since 2007-09-30
Posts 1474At the Crossroads of Infinity |
That was very good & I second Arctic's welcome.... |
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Fareed Member
since 2008-02-08
Posts 75 |
I liked the beginning very much. And you stood well to it, Kudos. |
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