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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2008-02-04 08:17 PM

Passion's Lullaby

As if I am the hungry surf
Swirling eagerly a foreign shore
Tempting me in harmony,
Pulling in and giving more
Seduction of the mind, at first
Soft foam, the moan anticipates
The fond of fingers to explore
What each, the heart articulates
A sea of charms emote the depths
So true, each drawn in deeper breaths
The flash of smile, unyielding sighs
A story written with the eyes
Astound and fury, passions wake
The rock of waves in yearning make

Copyright kkh 2/4/08

TomMark
Member Elite

since 2007-07-27

Posts 2133
LA,CA

1 posted 2008-02-04 08:50 PM

very very beautiful.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

2 posted 2008-02-04 08:50 PM

Very Beautiful TD!!!!

ARCTIC WIND

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

3 posted 2008-02-04 09:33 PM

You are most certainly on a role, nice one
kiddo.

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

4 posted 2008-02-04 09:49 PM

..."A story written with the eyes..." . And this most certainly was a story to the eyes, my friend.

Enjoyed...

j.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2008-02-05 11:39 AM

Wow, reading you is always a treat, dear TD!

love
Margherita

dollmaker
Member

since 2006-08-30

Posts 155
mass dorchester

6 posted 2008-02-05 02:45 PM

i love this....

love dollmaker

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

7 posted 2008-02-05 03:02 PM

Nice!! Joyce

marcel
Senior Member

since 2003-03-02

Posts 660
az, usa

8 posted 2008-02-07 12:51 PM

i pictured myself within the words of your voice, and found comfort with my pen and pad, on a cliff overlooking the sea.......

effjayel
Senior Member

since 2007-09-30

Posts 1474
At the Crossroads of Infinity

9 posted 2008-02-07 01:03 PM

TD, these words hit home like the waves pounding the rocks, it rocks !

John

Honeybunch
Member Rara Avis

since 2001-12-29

Posts 7115
South Africa

10 posted 2008-02-09 04:49 PM

Enjoyed very much TD!

"A story written with the eyes" - Love it!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2008-02-10 02:42 PM

My favourite line is:

"A story written with the eyes".

~ The eyes truly are windows to the soul!

Oh, and btw, all the other lines were right up there, as well! lol

EA

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

12 posted 2008-02-10 04:42 PM

Nice...James

Fareed
Member

since 2008-02-08

Posts 75

13 posted 2008-02-12 04:38 AM

Oh it makes me so envious. I love this place.

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