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Spuddette
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since 2008-07-03

Posts 112
England

0 posted 2008-07-03 05:04 PM

In a graceless twinkling languor
I am your moon
In silver swathed
Cadaverous my orbit ponders
Full the heavenly
Longing weighs
In a timeless circling hanker
I am your moon
Of unshed tears
Exiled from
Your atmosphere
Bathing in your deep blue wonder
Ever waiting
For you here.

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

1 posted 2008-07-03 05:29 PM

hello,

Welcome to PIP,
loved your moon poem,
of course the moon and I
have this magical attraction as well!

i_am_patch!
Member

since 2008-06-24

Posts 108
manila, philippines

2 posted 2008-07-04 08:40 AM

hi moon..
im a star.

welcome to this sky.

scoff
Member

since 2008-07-04

Posts 71
Georgia

3 posted 2008-07-04 09:08 AM

"I am your moon
Of unshed tears
Exiled from
Your atmosphere"

I know the feeling.

Great imagery. Very well done.

Grinch
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since 2005-12-31

Posts 2929
Whoville

4 posted 2008-07-04 01:30 PM

Hello Janet,

Howya doin?

There was member called Spud on here a while back - you poetry is similar - are you related perchance?

Spuddette
Member

since 2008-07-03

Posts 112
England

5 posted 2008-07-04 04:04 PM

long long while. cant even remember what I posted or what my log on was so probably was me. Fancy that eh!

Spuddette
Member

since 2008-07-03

Posts 112
England

6 posted 2008-07-04 04:40 PM

Well bugger me it was me after all. hehehe. That you CW?

Grinch
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since 2005-12-31

Posts 2929
Whoville

7 posted 2008-07-04 05:03 PM

quote:
That you CW?

Depends:

If you mean that really nice bloke with the funny repartee and winning smile then hell yes.

If you mean that nasty old git with the bad temper that worked above the ARC then no way.

Spuddette
Member

since 2008-07-03

Posts 112
England

8 posted 2008-07-04 05:12 PM

Hehehe.
Inapropriate forum I know - but I had a belting nite on Sat. Never going the
Speaks again...they are baaad kidnapping folk until 5am. Didnt get a chance for a proper catchyuppy....so hope you are well. x

Grinch
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since 2005-12-31

Posts 2929
Whoville

9 posted 2008-07-04 06:33 PM

Chatting in a poetry forum!

God forbid!

I think it’s absolutely disgusting and should never ever be allowed, it debases the hallowed pillars of decency on which our poetic art is founded .

I hear the party was highbrow
I wish I could have made it now
Scouse was more than likely there
Spouting Chekov from her chair

I small aperitif or two
A ladies room (don’t mention loo)
Some caviar and brandy too
A real sophisticated do

All evening gowns and formal dress
Best behaviour - let’s impress
A gentle waltz, a string quartet
Then homeward in one’s private jet.

So much for hallowed pillars.

I’m fine BTW

Spuddette
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since 2008-07-03

Posts 112
England

10 posted 2008-07-05 10:32 AM

Yes it really was a charming party
and as you say quite "arty farty"
As Beth gaily swang about the room
Starvin Marvin did gloomily loom
And with not a mixer to be seen
the spirits went down straight and mean.
The revellers were a super lark
Except MLR who's quite the shark (yuk).
And Neils fella had such perfect diction
As he said "D yer wanna lift ome in me citroen".

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