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strange thing, love |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
this world of instant communication still collides with the heart how cruel the day begins when your text is ignored again how you shame yourself into dreams of what may happen or may have been to think you are alone as you try again, and nothing comes. a silent rage takes hold of you every two minutes you check to see but your soul knows deep inside that an answer has not replied. I miss just calling on the phone but then again I miss it all of face to face, to see your eyes to kiss you lips and know you lied. |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh Michael...this is very sad to read... I hope you will smile again soon.. love and hugs. love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I miss it all of face to face, to see your eyes to kiss you lips and know you lied Is real love blind or is real love sightful ?... I enjoyed the deep and writing of your poem. yann |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Silence can be hard to bear Hope |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
This captures that anxious sensation well. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Michael, I read your poem first thing this morning and had no time to respond. It followed me throughout the day and I had to come find it again. I have felt this - and you capture the frustration and compulsion so well. I have saved this one - and thank you for sharing. Alison |
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