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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Outcry Discretionary tears puddle the lawn Convulsing in the wind, the sky spends its downpour Aspiring to be the sea, in vertical tide Change is messy Elongated strikes of electric lighted mania Fused purple and blue made sword and victor Flooding the sidewalks, rippled and muddied There is often beauty in chaos The stirring of inquisitive colors that peace would never dredge Gentleness would never hedge, the shimmer of newness Cleansed and sweet, the drowning out of silence Shiny lakes swallow the grass, so soft In the warm and steamy evening curtailing of deluge After every moment seems a lifetime long Almost passion, hinted in thunderous repeat Although, I know your smile, even in the rain Copyright Kkh 7/2/08 |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
quote: ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Very nice, Diamond. Ida |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Always enjoy reading you my friend. The closing line was perfect. j. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
There is indeed magnificent beauty in Nature's chaos! |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
beautifully captured |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I love Natures beauty!  ARCTIC WIND |
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Spuddette Member
since 2008-07-03
Posts 112England |
This is very pretty - I enjoyed the read. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: I'm fascinated by your poetry and this is no exception. Love, Margherita |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I love this. Besides the beauty in its entirety and in each word, I loved the conceptual format of the last line of each stanza explaining and summarising the stanza, and I particularly loved the enigmatic "although" in the last line that leaves me wondering and pondering as to its meaning. - Owl |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Discretionary tears puddle the lawn Convulsing in the wind, the sky spends its downpour Aspiring to be the sea, in vertical tide Change is messy ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ OMG, you are such a brilliant and vivacious poetess. Even the chaos is a sight to behold through your eyes. I always look forward to reading you, time and time again. ~Hug~ |
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