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Open Poetry #42

Define: Love

KeyLimeSorbet
Member

since 2008-03-05

Posts 74
Colorado

0 posted 2008-07-02 07:39 PM

They feel closer as they hold one another,
They grow in a bond as they love together.
She's scared she knows,
Of the hurt that love bestows.
'He's scared too...'
she thinks.
'If he only knew...'
her heart sinks.
What if he isnt scared?
It's happened before.
This time she is prepared.
To have her heart be torn.

"Tonight" she whispers,
"I will try"
Why live in love as a secret,
fear is no reason to keep it.
Embrace together or fall apart,
Tonight she will find out if love is worth the risk of loss.

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

1 posted 2008-07-02 07:43 PM

Amazing. I just this moment wrote and posted an improv in the dark poetry forum about love, not so great as this, but with a similar title called, "Undefined." It sucks and isn't worth reading but the subject seems to be universal. Your poem, however, does not suck. I like yours better, but I was in a mood, lol!

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2008-07-02 08:22 PM

Love is worth the risk..take it

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2008-07-04 03:12 AM

Enjoyed...James

i_am_patch!
Member

since 2008-06-24

Posts 108
manila, philippines

4 posted 2008-07-04 04:30 AM

awww....I SOO LOVE IT!
i can almost see myself in that situation there.

"all things change, and we must change with them..."

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