Open Poetry #42 |
Those Words Unheard |
nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Those Words Unheard Waiting lately for more than what comes, Promises, once depended upon. Slips away, time, the most precious of all. Trying to climb from the down of the fall. Where is the wisdom, the hope in the feel That once filled the mind with moments ideal? Where does one go when the circles are drawn and the road to tomorrow winds on and on To nowhere of knowing where the sunset will find Intimate memories shared not just in mind. Been a long journey, too long some would say. Just day to day living in those words once cliche'. Between the lines watching the traveling, each word. Here in the now, mind discussions unheard. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...excellent write! Eric |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
So nice to see you, Eric. Thank you for the nice response and for stopping in. M |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Agreed. Fantastic writing. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Garapan, thank you M |
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ctowen Member Elite
since 2001-10-18
Posts 2286Green Mountains of VT |
thoughts .... as naked as the truth presented .... you can only be you!! : ) CT |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Achingly sad, but very beautiful, Maureen. - Owl |
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