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Rag Reaching
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Rag Reaching |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
With cotton, long forgotten and wasted wool, Nylons lost, satins either cast or wind’s pull, The mass of rags has filled the dirty alley. Who will notice those cast off threads, Dirty whites, blues, greens and stains of red, No one cares, which is why they’ve blown away; Shivering in the wind of a passing car. Can the pain of being so lost and forgot Bring feeling to where feelings are not Laying there gathering rags and sorrow; Can caring be where emotions shouldn’t be Has something been give to rags set free More than lifeless in the alley’s shadow? Feeling the mind inside a passing car. Gloom |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Can the pain of being so lost and forgot Bring feeling to where feelings are not You made me think that feelings and sentiments could be inventions...Everyone has to invent his own feelings and face them to the world... thank you yann |
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Professor Gloom Member Elite
since 2000-07-23
Posts 3082of Depression |
Thank you, 2islander2, I am pleased you took the time to read and respond, Since this series is expected to be unpopular Such a well thought out response is much appreciated. Gloom |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
"RAG" reaching? |
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