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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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by the sea

0 posted 2008-07-01 07:37 AM

My mouth is a battlefield,
two lost crowns,
a tooth which vacillates,
a tooth decay that sound the bugle,
Tomorrow I’ll sign the armistice
and surrender to my dentist.

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29

Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia

1 posted 2008-07-01 07:40 AM

oh Yann you poor thing! I had a tooth extracted a couple of months ago.. much better being out! Bonne chance!! love RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

2islander2
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2 posted 2008-07-01 07:48 AM

Thank you Roniece, I hate so much dentists but they are so helpful...Thank your for your kind comment...

yann

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2008-07-01 08:21 AM

quote:
Tomorrow I’ll sign the armistice
and surrender to my dentist

Oh, dear Yann, this is sooooo cute!! The best attitude is one of TRUST. You really have to surrender!

It's always an unpleasant experience, but untended toothache can be worse! So take the courage and walk straight with faith!

Love and soothing hugs.
Margherita

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

4 posted 2008-07-01 10:30 AM

Yo Yann,

Some people have bad teeth. I lost my last natural tooth forty years ago. It the best thing I ever did for myself. No more tooth troubles.

Bobby

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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5 posted 2008-07-01 10:51 AM

Hi Margherita,Hi Bobby thank you for sharing your advices and story, Tooth is the worst part of the "imagination" of God when he created the man, He should have care more...

Thanks to you

yann

Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

6 posted 2008-07-01 11:32 AM

My mouth is no battlefield,
Although calcium has been blasted away
For silver alloys fills where it did yield;
Yet my mouth always has its say.
If there is battle it is in my voice
Taken to hypocrites and fools,
They are my battle of choice
Crowned calcium are only tools.

Gloom

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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7 posted 2008-07-01 11:52 AM

Thank you Gloom, your answer is very enjoyable and very sensitive...Such inspiration is very welcomed....I owe you this one...

thanks

yann

vandana

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since 1999-10-22

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USA

8 posted 2008-07-01 12:29 PM

enjoyed

2islander2
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9 posted 2008-07-01 01:07 PM

Thanks for passing by Vandana.

yann

OwlSA
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since 2005-11-07

Posts 9347
Durban, South Africa

10 posted 2008-07-01 02:33 PM

I will think of you tomorrow at your dentist, Yann. I know you know that it will be worth it. The experience at the dentist won't be enjoyable; you may have discomfort and even a certain amount of pain for a while, but all that will soon be over, and you will feel so much better after that. The most important thing to do while the dentist is working in your mouth is to RELAX and to KEEP YOUR HEAD STILL. It may make you feel better to close your eyes too, so that you don't see the tools that he is working with. Just think of something relaxing, like falling asleep after a long difficult day - or lying on a beach in the sun. Good luck, and make sure you get a good night's rest tonight. I enjoyed your poem.

- Owl

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12

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11 posted 2008-07-01 04:23 PM

Thank You Owl, you are so nice.

yann

XGarapanX
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since 2008-06-19

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12 posted 2008-07-01 08:59 PM

Hilarious! Thanks for the laugh.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

FastForward
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since 2008-06-29

Posts 66

13 posted 2008-07-02 11:42 PM

I think this is hillarious. Fun words make these horrible dental issues "smiley".

2islander2
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14 posted 2008-07-03 02:55 AM

Thank You Garapan and Fast Forward for your kind comments, I'm glad of the laughters.

yann

OwlSA
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Durban, South Africa

15 posted 2008-07-03 05:56 PM

How did it go at the dentist, Yann?

- Owl

2islander2
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16 posted 2008-07-04 03:23 AM

Thank you Owl, it's okay and didn't hurt...
Yann

OwlSA
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Durban, South Africa

17 posted 2008-07-04 12:43 PM

Good, I'm glad.

- Owl

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