“Thank you Ezra Pound”

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Open Poetry #42

“Thank you Ezra Pound”

The Shadow in Blue
Member

since 2006-05-18

Posts 493
EL, Michigan

0 posted 2008-06-30 07:21 PM

This free verse bird
Has never forced
Pre-Pound’s form
On to her own

For if she did
It would be
A hot tranny mess,
God bless her soul

So, in an honest attempt
At conveying her voice
She echoes each word
With heartfelt reverence

Carefully crafting
Each syllable,
Insuring its integrity,
The best she can

And if it so happens
That the stanzas do rhyme
Than you shall a see
A small smile grace her lips

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2008-06-30 07:33 PM

Very lovely!

I am wearing a smile too, thank you ...

Love,
Margherita

The Shadow in Blue
Member

since 2006-05-18

Posts 493
EL, Michigan

2 posted 2008-06-30 07:39 PM

Glad to make you smile Margherita. Now my mission is complete.
^_^

~Jill

XGarapanX
Senior Member

since 2008-06-19

Posts 1435
Antarctica

3 posted 2008-07-01 09:08 PM

Now this was so well crafted I forgot how to speak English for a moment.

·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`·

The Shadow in Blue
Member

since 2006-05-18

Posts 493
EL, Michigan

4 posted 2008-07-01 09:37 PM

Thanks for the compliment, Garapan. It seems I'm on a roll,poetically speaking.

Peace Out,
Jill

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