Open Poetry #42 |
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When Cute Flats Attack |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan ![]() |
When cute flats attack Don’t just sit back and gab, Flapping and yapping In an endless delirium Instead, bravely Soldier on, Suck it up And stride forth Stifle the groans and Indecipherable moans, And if need be Pick up some Dr. Scholl’s Because for any cute shoe From Stilettos to Its’ sister in flats No price is too steep JNS |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
A very enjoyable read with an inherent message! I liked your choice of words. miscellanea |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
Glad you enjoyed my write-up about flats, the good and the bad. As lover of shoes, it was a joy to write. Painful, but worth it. For unnatural killers they sure are aesthetically and poetically pleasing. (Sorry for the rambling). Sidenote: Dr. Scholls lies with regards to their advertisement, at least in my case because I don't believe that bruised heels constitue "feeling crazy good." Oh course I guess it all depends on the style of shoe they make. JNS |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
Enjoyed your humor about shoes. My poor feet never can seem to find a pair that aren't killers. This summer, my big sis took me to a shoe store in her state where every pair I tried on fit perfectly! I bought more shoes to take home than I've bought in ten years! When the shoe fits, wear it!!! Amazing, they were even good looking shoes! Enjoyed your comment. miscellanea |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Very entertaining. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
That's my job Garapan. ^_^ ~JNS |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
Miscellanea-Shoes are sure fickle sometime. Don't I know it. I have a feeling you would love DSW. Yay for rows upon rows of shoes. I can't wait until I can have a (shoe) shopping spree like you. I usually only find one of two fitting,cute shoes when I go shopping. I guess I'm too picky. Or I have bad luck with regards to size. Enjoyed your comment. ~Jill |
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