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Paris Upon an Afternoon
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Paris Upon an Afternoon |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Paris Upon an Afternoon "Time passes slowly and sincerely when someone dear is near." Over poached eggs and French bread we gaze into each others eyes, hard to look away even if we tried. Her eyes are sending a message, saying that she wants more, more than to share coffee and eggs she wants to make a score. "Yes, yes, yes I feel that way too, every moment that passes between us has made me want more of you." She takes a sip of coffee, she places her cup on the table, and then she softly rubs my leg to tell me that she is available. She inquires, "What shall we do with the rest of this afternoon?" I tell her partly in French, "I have a lovely bedroom." She says, "Of course I want that too but before we do that, I wish to share a sweet afternoon with you." So we bought some ham sandwiches, some pastry and some wine, we bicycled into the Country singing French songs that rhyme. We stopped to bounce pebbles upon a silky stream, along comes a man on a bicycle cart and we buy some heavenly icecream. I fill her basket with flowers she gives me our first kiss, we smile and touch sensually enjoying the blessings of bliss. JamesLee 30June 2008 |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
That paints a beautiful picture! I enjoyed the words and images much! |
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The Shadow in Blue Member
since 2006-05-18
Posts 493EL, Michigan |
Such a sweet poem, James. Kudos to you. Your imagery was beautiful, especially the poached eggs and french bread bit.  ~Jill |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
oh James!!! anything with Paris in the title and you have my attention! ... loved this from you.. so wonderful! mmmm.... only 51 more sleeps until I return to my beloved Paris!!  love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
And wasn't it worth it, dear James!? The joy of anticipation! Lovely and sweet. Love, Margherita |
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rad802 Member
since 2008-04-19
Posts 279KY U.S.A. |
nice Rick Delmonico |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I have always wanted to go to Paris! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
It's so sweet and so romantic James, such a wonderful reading...We should try to always keep relationships this way... thanks yann |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Awesome write. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you graeshine, Shadow In Blue, Roniece, Margherita, rad802, A Romantic Heart, 2islander2 and XGarapanX for the wonderful responses... Roniece you are a blessed woman to have a trip to Paris lined up... Romantic Heart I see Paris in your future...James |
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