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Kindled Fire
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jbal892 Member
since 2007-11-25
Posts 58 |
Kindled Fire Some call me crazy, Others insane, Posing questions, Wanting answers Wondering why I wait this long, All for a girl that may not even matter They don’t see, What I see That glint in her eye as I stare, Straight down to her soul That tone in her voice, As we talk all night long They say I need to move on, It’s been to long now, The fire is dead Reduced to ash That fire, I say, Is now a small ember Waiting to be kindled Into a blazing bonfire The fire of desire Is never completely put out It lays dormant Waiting for the moment to re-ignite Maybe I am crazy, And insane too There’s only one cure Of this I’m sure |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"That fire, I say, Is now a small ember Waiting to be kindled Into a blazing bonfire" And that is why there are love poets writing throughout all of recorded history! |
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jbal892 Member
since 2007-11-25
Posts 58 |
Wow, thanks for that compliment =) I appreciate it! |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
This makes me long for a certain someone. Beautiful poem. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
you are not crazy..your still in love...love never dies, it just grows dim.... never going out! |
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KeyLimeSorbet Member
since 2008-03-05
Posts 74Colorado |
im just now learning about real love, and its definantly a beautiful thing to be kindled :-) |
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jbal892 Member
since 2007-11-25
Posts 58 |
Thanks! I just wrote another one on a similar topic called A Sudden Realization at the top of the page |
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