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the right to remain silent
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the right to remain silent |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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when a guy clams down, don't pry him open as you would an oyster you won't find resolutions nicely shaped up into lucid diamonds you would trigger tons of salt particles -ones that he even didn't know existed- to pierce him till he feels the surging hurt, the kind which emotional Band-Aids don't subdue |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Wonderful writing. Love your thoughts. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"You have the right to remain silent.... anything you say can and will be used against you in a court of law." In the USA, these are known as the Miranda rights. Often it's the best 'common' sense approach even in personal relationships. Prying someone open like an oyster...that's some powerful imagery! But that's what many people feel they have the 'right' to do. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
You have some deep imagery in this one Kaile Quite a thought behind few words. Lindsay |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
hey, thanks for reading |
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