Open Poetry #42 |
Seek and Find |
A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
You whisper, I will listen, awaiting in serene silence, humbled by your presence, Cloaked in graceful humility, I stand in the awe of you, you have made my heart heavy, I desire to know you more, to seek you and to find, love everlasting and pure. [This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (06-28-2008 07:21 PM).] |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
for whatever my ever-most-humble opinion is worth (or not?)... this is a most fine piece of pure Romanticism! [however, the giant 'graphics image' rather detracts from the grace and power of the written imagery] much applause for the 'penning! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
The tongue of amour Has not the need for words, yes. It is a communication Of sight, And touch, Of Taste, And the bouquet, Of allurement Our hearts get heavy When feelings kept Are not released, To those For whom They are intended It is the whispering Of sweet nothings That show us, Our real desires As your silence coos softly Upon yearning’s pride That replies deeply Within |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
Sublime. This actually makes love sound attractive, lol! (sorry, my own bad experiences talking) ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
humbled by your presence, you told everything in this single verse, your poem is both loud of meanings and mysterious...Enjoyed very much yann |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Bruce, I sincerely wish to thank you for noticing my talent, and placing me in the heavens as a bright and shining star.... my heartfelt thanks and gratitude! ~ARH |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Richy, My , my, you should post these replies of yours as poems, they are too lovely to be hidden below my poems.... thank You for letting me know that I am inspiring you, that fuels my fire to inspire and to write more! ~ARH |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Mr. G.... You just need some love...lol, Your love may have been bad in the past, but that is the past, today is a new day for you! Mr. Ken...LOL |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Yann, Mysterious is what I like to be, to keep you interested, never boring, intriguing,always something new, spontaneous .....fun! thanks for seeing me, in my poetry! |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
I asked my replies if they wanted to leave here and come out into open as poems, but they said no, that they would rather stay here close to you. Oh well, who can blame them? Rich |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
oh how sweet, so they are just mine, for me...so i will keep them close... |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
I enjoyed this! ARCTIC WIND |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Mr. wind when are you going to write? I have been waiting to read your imaginative poetry~ ~ARH |
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