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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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In my dreams I dream of you on sapphire seas in the early morning mist sailing through a blue grotto that leads to your ocean. Off shore and all alone the scent of sandal wood and floral gardens entwine themselves to the sun and sky. See through white linen skirts around the edge saved for Sundays best I confess In my dreams I dream of you. Stringing leis in an array of plumeria and jasmine that bow to exotic pleasures and miracles. Sheer curtains billow at my window pikake and ginger slow dance in the breeze complimenting the passion. Like diamond tear drops sparkle in the sunlight, silk on satin clings and sizzles. A fan hums a lazy rhythm swaying palms seduce the wind skims across your skin. My slip slides off the shoulder a hint of strapless tan lines polished bronze, discreet in shadows splayed across the Mediterranean. Blushing streams in the afterglow where I wear you at my leisure, on my wrists and the nape of my neck between lush ferns and the soft valley of passion and desire. Deep in the heart of a woman sleepy eyed and shy the sweet breath of a sigh dims the light beneath my lashes, sipping honeysuckle off your lips. Like a french perfume permeates the air the scent of you is every where in my dreams I dream of you. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Wonderful, wonderful poem Bluezy! I think this one will always be my favorite! Richy  [This message has been edited by Richy (06-29-2008 06:21 PM).] |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Keep on dreaming, gal, because yours as written here is an absolute delight and worthy of repeating often. Love it! Helen |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Into the library of Love with this one, Bluesy! WOW! |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lori sweetie when I saw this and read it I knew I needed to leave this for you.  Your words made me think of this right away...both, so very beautiful as if they were meant for each other. Loved this gal...Hugs ~D |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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graeshine2006 Member
since 2008-06-03
Posts 368The Prairie Lands, USA |
That is beautiful. Love the scents used to capture it. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thanks to all of you good poets. And Donna, you have completed my poem with the picture you put up. It suits my words perfectly. Thank you very much for being so thoughtful. |
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XGarapanX Senior Member
since 2008-06-19
Posts 1435Antarctica |
I'm not a good poet, but I sure like your poem. ·´~`·»Garapan«·´~`· |
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BugBuggy Member
since 2005-12-19
Posts 130michigan |
that was breath taking.....very well written and I loved every line start to finish BugBuggy |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You dream so very beautifully, dear Lori. A pure delight to read! And Donna's picture completes your words magically. Love, Margherita  |
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rad802 Member
since 2008-04-19
Posts 279KY U.S.A. |
hello Rick Delmonico |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Lori hon your poem was already complete. When I read your words I thought of this picture right away. I love what you do with words. |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
Makes me want to stay awake and dream so the dream never ends Such bliss never lasts too long beyond the first kiss Stay a dreamer, sweet blonde poet of slumber |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Oh darn, I accidently bumped this up to the top when I was rereading it for the tenth time, how clumsy of me. Oh well, this just gives those who missed it the first time a second chance to enjoy it once more. Bluezy, again, this was beautiful! |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Beautiful poem to read! ARCTIC WIND |
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Spuddette Member
since 2008-07-03
Posts 112England |
Beautiful images. As Im not going on hols this year I will have to use this one as my form of escape. thanks. |
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